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    December 28

    Hello I am back > and one of my stories

    Hello fellow spacers,
    It has been long since I updated my space, but as it is end of the year, and as I am working for Strategic Marketing and Media Research Institute I have loads of work that is taking almost every free minute that I have. In January there are ellections here in Serbia and in research center we are working like bees. I wish you all belated Merry Christmas.
    Cheers!!
    ===============

    In need, indeed

    She was walking along the shore of emerald green lake. Her mind was in turmoil. She felt, she knew, that she does not belong to this world.

    She never did.

    One gull hovered over the green lake screaming. She found one tree trunk and sat on it. Small waves touched her bare feet, and gentle breeze caressed her hair. She was sitting like that fighting the windmills in her mind and watching the sun easily setting down. The shadows became longer.

    - Is it free? – Suddenly she heard the voice.

    - Sit – She whispered without even looking at the man who approached.

    Silence surrounded them while they were watching the sky changing its colour from bluish purple to dark orange red of the dying sun.

    - It is becoming cold, -he said- here, take my jacket, I have a sweater.

    His jacket was still full of his body heat which embraced her gently. She tucked in the jacket and let the warmth spread through her body. Pleasant manly scent was on the collar of the jacket. She looked at him with gratitude in her eyes and smiled. He put his hand around her and sat closer embracing her. She did not resist, nor did she speak a word. They were sitting like that for a while till the last sun rays faded away.

    - Let’s go, it is becoming colder – he said – let’s go home.

    “Home” she thought …… where the home...is …


    I have to thank my dear friend for taking trouble and editing my story. Sometimes I just complicate things to much, and I guess that I am lucky to have someone to count on (though it takes lots of patience ... LOL...).

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    Vijaywrote:
    I guess we have to continue corresponding with the msn team replying with the results we observe to their troubleshooting steps. Keep me in the loop so that I can step in if needed!
    Feb. 3
    Vijaywrote:
    Wassup? Not out of warranty, out of production, needing-ingenious solutions hardware again i hope :)
    Jan. 27
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    Joyful Forester wrote:
    Hey are u kidnapped or not well these days? I dont get to hear anything from you, no visits to the space, no comments, no mails. Whats all this. You remember somebody called Joyful forester?
    Puneet
    Jan. 16
    sweeti'swrote:
    Jelena
    This is beautiful so full of feelings   Its touchy
    I love it
    Best wishes  Jelena  
     
    Jan. 5
    Sudhir Nathwrote:
    Hi Jelena - Interesting reading. Ty. Keep it up. Wish you and your family A Happy and Prosperous New Year. Sudhir
    Jan. 2
    Wishing you and your loved ones a very happy new year!
    Dec. 30
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    Joyful Forester wrote:
    Wow Jel
    So finally a new post from you. Yeah its beautifully short and sweet. Before one starts imagining, it gets over and you are on way home........ Ah thats the beauty. I just read Sonia's comment where the home is.....heart cannot be far away.....as it lives there. I think she is right but perhaps that Heart is already there, it has found a niche where it wants to beat. Wishing you and your boys ...... a wonderful 2007, May you make that niche your permanent home in this year itself. No need to wait anymore. All the best.
    Puneet

    Dec. 30
    Vijaywrote:
    Ah, lakes are one of my favorite backdrops...they seem to represent the placid, humdrum existence which seems to get shaken up with the arrival of the guy here...this yarn has a smooth flow as it lulls one to gentle dreams :) Keep penning on!
     
    So it seems like trains aren't really popular there apart from maybe among the tourists? Here it's probably way different inside the trains than you got out there as a lot of people use the trains here and it can get quite congested....only a few long distance trains dont see people standing in the aisles waiting for a seat to become vacant. So, if anyone plans to travel they better reserve their journey in advance. But one just can't beat the romanticism of a journey off the beaten tracks...checkout my friend's snaps of one such train journey - http://www.photoblog.com/user/sloganmurugan/2006/12/19/
    Dec. 29
    Soniawrote:
    Hi Jelena, lovely to hear from you after so long! Can imagine it being busy at your end!
    Grt story and beautiful thoughts,Jelena! Enjoyed it thoroughly!
    Where the home is.....heart cannot be far away...as it lives there :)!!
    Wishing you and your loved ones a very happy new year! Wishing tou all a lifetime of health,happiness,peace,joy and prosperity...today,tomorrow..always!
    Tc,
    Love,
    Sonia,
     
    Dec. 29
    Alien Hunterwrote:
    Hello Jelena,
     
    Mixing words into one language becomes quite difficult. That is why the English language is so difficult to understand. It has a little bit of everything. I haven't found an edition of Windows that causes me problems but I have used them all.
     
    May the work not wear you down to the point of being unable to enjoy the start of the new year. Happy New Year.
     
    Peace, Love, & Blessings.
    Dec. 29
    lima luiswrote:
    Hi Jelena,how are you?I hope well.Sorry i don´t contact for some time.i am in the south of Portugal,in Algarve,with my Boys.They live there,and i stay with them for Christmas and New Year.I return in Jan/3.
    Thank you for your visit.I just ''Still'' the PC of my Son,because, i have some friends, with great problems, in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.They have some crimes all over the City,and i was very preoc/ with them.
    I wish you a GREAT NEW YEAR.That 2007 give you all you need,and whant.
    All the best for you,Family and Friends.Keep in touch.
    Take care
     
    Luis
    Dec. 29
    Ruma Senwrote:
    Hi Jelena! So nice of you to drop by and leave your comments. I know you keep very busy, so I didn't visit your space for sometime. Before the year ends, I want to wish you A Very Happy 2007. May the coming year be full of good cheer, health and prosperity for you and your family. Your short story is good. Maybe you can develop on it once you are over with your busy period. Bye for now..take care! Much love,Ruma.
    Dec. 29
    Indeed..it is a beautiful composition of thoughts...full of emotions and beauty. Please share your link on flickr, and abut that advice of the change of setings, i am going to try that today, didnt do it before coz i dont have a tripod here, so i usually avoid slow shutter shots.
     
    I wanna see your work too, please share.
     
    Greetings.
     
    Cheers,
    Saurabh...
    Dec. 29

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